Today I’ll be participating again in First Chapter First Paragraph, hosted by Diane, at Bibliophile by the Sea.
I’ll also be spotlighting the excerpt in Teaser Tuesdays, at Should Be Reading.
I’m featuring another of my own creations today: Embrace the Whirlwind.
Synopsis: How does one person connect to another in a meaningful and satisfying way? Can a tortured past and tangled family history impede prospects for finding happiness in the future? The author explores the multidimensional character of Amber Cushing, a young woman whose conflicted relationship with her mother propels her into a whirlwind of bad choices. Her growing addiction to love pushes her out of control and thwarts any chance at happiness. But when she begins to explore her own feelings and understand the reasons behind her actions, Amber starts to forgive herself and to forge a brave new future.
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She hadn’t trusted in the myth of “happily ever after” for a very long time, but despite herself, she had believed that he was going to be the love of her life. After all, the two of them had been hanging out pretty regularly now for a couple of months. He came to the roadhouse where she worked, usually right after he finished up with his construction crew, and they had fallen into the habit of leaving together after her shift ended. But tonight had been different, right from the start.
First of all, he had barely acknowledged her presence when he got there. Still, she had tried not to take it personally, telling herself that he was just catching up with the guys. But then he’d started flirting with some of the other girls who had come in halfway through the night. Toward the end of her shift at the roadhouse, she had watched Buck walking out with that little twit, the one who had been hanging all over him all night long, and she could see the handwriting on the wall: he was moving on.
She had struggled along anyway, trying to pretend that none of it bothered her, until finally she was able to leave for the night. She headed toward the parking lot, and after she climbed into the old beat-up pickup truck, she huddled up inside for a few minutes wishing she could somehow disappear. She wished she could close her eyes, and then, once she opened them again this whole day would have magically turned out to be nothing but a dream. A nightmare, of course, but just a dream all the same! The humiliation of it all! She could still see the faces of the others as Buck had turned on his heel and walked out that door with someone else.
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Now I can’t wait to see what the rest of you are sharing! Come on by and share your thoughts.
After that…whew…I got nothin’…
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Okay…lol
Thanks for stopping by, Patty…I guess you got a glimpse of what this character is about.
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Ugh. I remember that feeling of rejection and trying to hide how I felt. I think you captured it perfectly. Here’s Mine
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Thanks, Paulita…I remember the feeling, too. So glad you could stop by; have a great week.
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Poor girl, that’s a horrible moment for anyone. Intriguing teaser! Here is my TT.
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Isn’t it amazing how we all remember that feeling? Thanks for stopping by, Pepca, and enjoy your week.
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Hi Laurel, it’s been so long since the time I visited your blog, and I’m glad to discover another great teaser here. Thanks for sharing this.
Here’s my TT for the week:
http://gatheringbooks.wordpress.com/2012/03/20/teaser-tuesday-girl-power-and-chaos-walking/
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You’re welcome, Myra, and thanks for visiting and “liking” this post. Hope you have a great week.
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Thanks for sharing. Great teaser! Thanks for stopping by mine this morning. 😉
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You’re welcome, creative deeds…glad you could visit today; hope you have a wonderful week.
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Oh, the sad pain and humiliation of being reject. Loved the scene build-up. Well done Laurel.
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Thanks, Diane, glad you liked it…and thanks again for hosting this meme every week. Glad you could stop by.
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Aw poor her. That’s a great teaser! Awesome job! Thanks for stopping by!
Ning @ Reading by Kindle Fire
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Thanks, Ning…hope you have a fabulous week, and thanks for stopping by.
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I don’t ever remember seeing this book of yours before. I love the teaser and am putting it on my TBR list!
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Thanks, Vicki…this one has a “spin-off” coming out in the next few months, called Interior Designs: about one of the characters in this one.
Glad you could stop by…have a great week!
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She’s better off without the bum.
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Oh, absolutely, Alice Audrey! Thanks for stopping by, and enjoy your week.
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Your opening is the ultimate teaser. I don’t know what to think of this guy Buck. Maybe he’s just commitment shy or his friends have told him something about the woman or maybe he’s really bad news and she’s lucky he took somebody else home. Whoa – you made me think in three paragraphs!!
My first paragraph is here: Joyfully Retired
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I guess you’ll have to read on to know, lol. Thanks for stopping by, Margot, and I’m glad that my opener “teased” you. Have a great week!
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Makes you wonder what was up with him. Maybe he was just afraid. Loved reading it and want to read more.
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Glad you liked it, Jo…hope you will read more.
Thanks for stopping by, and enjoy your week!
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Wow! Great job. I thankfully haven’t experienced that deep of a rejection yet, but I’m sure it’s coming. 🙂
Thanks for stopping by my blog.
~Danica Page
Taking It One Page at a Time
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What’s that song from the eighties? “Looking for love in all the wrong places”…that’s her plight, I think.
Thanks for stopping by, Danica…have a great week!
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How fun to feature one of your own creations! I’d keep reading the book sounds great. thanks for stopping by today. kaye—the road goes ever ever on
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Thanks, Kaye, glad you liked it. And I’m happy you could stop by today; enjoy your week.
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Oh no! Poor girl. I know that feeling. Thanks for sharing and for stopping by my blog. 🙂
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Yes, she’s in a pickle, isn’t she? Thanks for visiting, Christine, and enjoy your week.
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Thanks for sharing the opening of one of your own works, and for visiting my teaser. Hope you’re ahving a good week!
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Thanks, Heather…I got a lot of editing done on my “spin-off” to Embrace the Whirlwind…feeling productive. Have a great week.
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Nice tease!
Thanks for visiting my blog!
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Glad you liked it, Jessica, and thanks for stopping by. Have a great week!
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Wow! That was a good one! Sounds similar to a situation I, unfortunately, have been in.
Thank you for sharing and stopping by my blog!
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Thanks, Violette…and I think most of us have gone through something resembling this at one time or another. Glad you could stop by, and enjoy your week.
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It is amazing how reading that passage can bring up those feelings of being rejected! Thanks for sharing your book with us Laurel.
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I’m glad you could “feel” it, Nise, and thanks for stopping by to comment. Hope you have a great week!
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How sad! I think we all know that feeling 😦
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Definitely! Thanks for stopping by, Crystal, and have a great week….
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That’s sad. A very public rejection.
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Yes, that’s the worst part, isn’t it, Shelley? Thanks for stopping by, and enjoy your week.
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What a heartbreaking teaser! So stunning. Thank you for sharing and for checking out my TT!
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Glad you liked it, Bookish Babes….and thanks for stopping by. Enjoy your week!
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Great teaser!! Thanks for stopping by.
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Thanks, Beth…glad you liked it…and I’m glad you could stop by. Have a great week.
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Hi! Thanks for dropping by my blog!
Great teaser! I know that feeling of wanting to disappear.
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Oh, me too, wuthering willow. I can relate to the experience. Thanks for stopping by, and have a great week.
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No one should know how that feels, but sadly, I think it’s something we all go through…
Great teaser 🙂
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I agree, Keely…and I appreciate the visit and comment. Have a great week!
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If I were here, I’d probably have slapped the guy by now.
Thanks for dropping by my blog~
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Ah, Eustacia, that sounds like just the right payback…lol
Thanks for stopping by, and have a great week.
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Interesting teaser. Thanks for visiting mine.
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Thanks, K. B., and I’m glad you could stop by…enjoy your week!
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Aww that sucks. I feel so sorry for her.
Thanks for stopping by Project to be Read 🙂
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Me too, actually…lol. And her troubles are only beginning….
But thanks for stopping by, Claire, and enjoy your weekend.
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Oh wow! This looks awesome! That first little bit really makes me want to read this book! I’m definitely adding this to by TBR pile! Thanks for sharing!
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Thanks, Stephanie, hope you enjoy it. And I’m glad you could stop by. Have a great weekend.
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